Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36

Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36
Message de here4u posté le 15-07-2025 à 11:13:42 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Another easy exercice that everyone can do!

Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre : 'SECOND CHANCE!'[ Questions non traitées dans celles proposées précédemment.)

1) Do you like camping ? With what comfort?

2) Is telling a lie always wrong?

3) Do you think girls have as many opportunities in life as boys?

4) 'Never look back... Look straight ahead!'


Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le mercredi 30 juillet ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 19-07-2025 à 22:45:34 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Encore quelques problèmes de transmission de messages... Désolée !

Here is ANSWER A: topic3: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

Do you think that girls have as many opportunities in life as boys?
Since the 15th century and until the present day, women have fought for equal rights, and to gain their freedom and independence.
In 2025, I believe we can say that attitudes and customs have changed a great deal. Girls have access to the high schools, they work as CEOs of major companies, they pilot cranes on construction sites and fly bombers. Women are
even present on the latest nuclear submarines. We can see girls on rugby pitches and boxing rings. Women can vote, lead governments and choose whether or not to have children, have their own bank account. etc...
Thanks to courageous, intelligent and inspirational women such as the very first French feminist Christine de Pisan, followed by the English women Mary Astell and Margaret Cavendish, and the woman nicknamed " the Mother of Feminism": Mary Wollstonecraft who have been the pioneers. However here is still too much violence against women in the world, too many women are subject to male dictatorship and oppressed. We have a long way to go, but the fight goes on...

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de gerold, postée le 21-07-2025 à 10:46:16 (S | E)
Hello!

Answer A Topic 3

Sorry, I can't use colours or underline.

Not much to say, it's a good text.

« women have fought » I would use another form

No full stop between account and etc

The sentence beginning with « Thanks to » is not a real sentence (a verb or verbs needed).
- inspirational women ? would « inspiring » be better?
However here is still too much violence … « here » is wrong, probably a typo

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Modifié par gerold le 21-07-2025 10:47

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de magie8, postée le 23-07-2025 à 11:02:34 (S | E)
hello Merci Gerold and here4u
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Do you think that girls have as many opportunities in life as boys?
Since the 15th century and until the present day, women have (been fighting for equal rights, and to gain their freedom and independence.
In 2025, I believe we can say that attitudes and customs have changed a great deal. Girls have access to the high schools, they work as CEOs of major companies, they pilot cranes on construction sites and fly bombers. Women are even present on the latest nuclear submarines. We can see girls on rugby pitches and boxing rings. Women can vote, lead governments and choose whether or not to have children, have their own bank account, etc...
We can thank the courageous, intelligent and inspirational women such as the very first French feminist Christine de Pisan, followed by the English women Mary Astell and Margaret Cavendish, and the woman nicknamed " the Mother of Feminism": Mary Wollstonecraft who have been the pioneers. However there is still too much violence against women in the world, too many women are subject to male dictatorship and oppressed. We have a long way to go, but the fight goes on...

inspiring (adj)= encouraging/ qui suscite l'inspiration
inspirational(adj)= making you feel encouraged/source d'inspiration ( pour moi il n'y a guere de difference

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 23-07-2025 à 16:50:04 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Merci de vos corrections...
Pourriez-vous, please, regarder la question que je vous ai posée sur le fil de Our Story 204 ? J'ai déjà eu une réponse très claire. Quel que soit votre désir, répondez moi, please... Je vous suivrai ! Ce serait même encore mieux si vous me disiez ce sur quoi vous aimeriez travailler (si vous voulez travailler !) ou ce avec quoi vous voudriez jouer (si vous préférez un jeu... )

ANSWER B: Topic 3: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...

'Of course!' men say, girls and boys now have the same rights, the same occasions. They go to the same schools, play together, study together and hear the medias harping on about "me too" and men who are allowed to take two weeks leave for the birth of a baby! So, who would say that they are not equal?
It is well known that girls are less good in maths and sciences because part of their brains was less stimulated when they were very young. It is therefore society determining and shaping the future of kids, not their intelligence, and this is a terrible realization...Women must be persuaded that they are intellignet; men are constantly repeted that they are...
Women must stop working when they have kids, while men can go on working when they want. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop an attachement to the kids... So, it is not a question of rights but of circumstances...

A little work for you! for your help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de gerold, postée le 23-07-2025 à 17:32:58 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER B: Topic 3: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...

A good text but with some typos

'Of course!' men say, girls and boys now have the same rights, the same occasions. They go to the same schools, play together, study together and hear the medias harping on about "me too" and men who are allowed to take xx two weeks leave for the birth of a baby! So, who would say that they are not equal?
It is well known that girls are less good in maths and sciences because xx part of their brains was less stimulated when they were very young. It is therefore society determining and shaping the future of kids, not their intelligence, and this is a terrible realization...Women must be persuaded that they are intellignet; men are constantly repeted that they are...
Women must stop working when they have kids, while men can go on working when they want xx. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop an attachement (not the right word, I think) to the kids... So, it is not a question of rights but of circumstances... (I don't understand the end)

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 26-07-2025 à 16:18:21 (S | E)
ANSWER B: Topic 3: A good text but with some typos: my indications after Gerold's.

'Of course!' men say, girls and boys now have the same rights, the same occasions. They go to the same schools, play together, study together and hear the medias harping on about "me too" and men who are allowed to take xx two weeks leave for the birth of a baby! So, who would say that they are not equal?
It is well known that girls are less good in maths and sciences because xx part of their brains was less stimulated when they were very young. It is therefore society determining and shaping the future of kids, not their intelligence, and this is a terrible realization... Women must be persuaded that they are intellignet; men are constantly repeted that they are...
Women must stop working when they have kids, while men can go on working when they want xx. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop an attachement (not the right word, I think) to the kids... So, it is not a question of rights but of circumstances... (I don't understand the end) I think I understand... but the use of 'circumstances' makes it somewhat clumsy.

J'ai vu quelques typos, mais ce qui m'a le plus gênée, est le manque de liaisons logiques et la juxtaposition d'idées, très intéressantes, mais qui manquent d'ordre. Le tout laisse une impression de bonnes idées dites confusément...

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de magie8, postée le 27-07-2025 à 07:19:41 (S | E)
Hello dears
answerB TOPIC3

Mon essai d'amélioration selon vos remarques, en espérant ne pas avoir rajouté de fautes alors qu'il n'y en avait pas beaucoup. Avec mes remerciements pour votre aide

Of course! Men say: ‘Girls and boys now have the same rights and opportunities.’
First, schools are co-educational. Girls and boys play together and study together. Second, they hear the media constantly harping on about the slogan: ‘Me too.’
Furthermore, nowadays men are entitled to two weeks ' leave when a child is born. So who would dare deny gender equality?
However, if we say that girls are less gifted in mathematics and science, it is actually because a part of their brain was less stimulated when they were very young. It is therefore society that determines and shapes children's futures, not their intelligence, and that is a terrible realisation...
On the other hand, women have to convince themselves that they are intelligent, while men are constantly told that they are...
On top of that, women have to stop working when they have children, while men can go on working when they want to. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop their paternal love.
To conclude, gender equality is therefore not a question of rights, but of education.

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Modifié par magie8 le 27-07-2025 08:20

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de gerold, postée le 27-07-2025 à 11:50:03 (S | E)
Hell!

Magie!

AnswerB TOPIC3

Of course! Men say: ‘Girls and boys now have the same rights and opportunities.’
First, schools are co-educational. Girls and boys play together and study together. Second, they hear the media constantly harping on about the slogan: ‘Me too.’
Furthermore, nowadays men are entitled to a two weeks' leave when a child is born. So who would dare deny gender equality?
However, if we say that girls are less gifted/not as/so good* at mathematics and science, it is actually because a part of their brain was less stimulated when they were very young. It is therefore society that determines and shapes the?? children's futures (no -s), not their intelligence, and that is a terrible realisation...
On the other hand, women have to convince themselves that they are intelligent, while men are constantly told** that they are...
On top of that, women have to stop working when they have children, while men can go on working when/if they want to. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop their paternal love/to take care more of their children.
To conclude, gender equality is therefore not (only) a question of rights, but (also) of education.

* Les Anglais préfèrent le comparatif d'inégalité au comparatif d'infériorité, surtout si l'adjectif est court. En tout cas, "less good" est jugé incorrect ou au moins maladroit.
** "... men are constantly repeated" me semble faux parce que la construction est to repeat something to somebody, pas somebody something, ce qui empêche de former un passif.

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Modifié par gerold le 27-07-2025 11:50

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de alouettelulu, postée le 27-07-2025 à 17:57:30 (S | E)
1) Do you like camping ? With what confort ?

I haven’t went camping for a long time, decades and even more. I was a teenager. But I remember that I really liked it : being in countryside the whole time, sleeping under the stars, breathing the fresh air…and very cheap holidays. But I remember as well, after several days camping was also feeling uncomfortable, and even dirty because it was difficult to get washed. I was young and it was not serious concerns. But now, I am seventy-three years old. I like comfort, a real roof when it rains or when the weather is too hot or too cold, a bathroom for the family, just the family. Anyway, a flat for living and the countryside near for walking whenever I want. Now, it is what I prefer.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de nedjy, postée le 28-07-2025 à 06:07:15 (S | E)
1)Do you like camping? With what comfort?


Yes, I like camping with just my boyfriend, a tent and a sleeping bag.
I also like to have a nice picnic basket with wine,chocolate sandwiches and fresh fruit to enjoy under the stars.
I love bringing a camera to take photos. I leave my house around 5pm with my boyfriend.
Along the road for nearly an hour taking photos of the setting sun.
We put up the tent and have dinner together, looking up at the stars. After 30 minutes of cuddling under the stars,we return to the tent ,get into the sleeping bag and sleep until the morning.
That's how I like camping.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 28-07-2025 à 19:14:41 (S | E)
Hello dears,

ANSWER C: Here are my indications: Let's remind you that you must send your ANSWERS to me in mps... Please !

1) Do you like camping ? With what confort ?

I haven’t went camping for a long time, decades and even more. I was a teenager. But I remember that I really liked it : being in countryside the whole time, sleeping under the stars, breathing the fresh air…and very cheap holidays. But I remember as well, after several days (punctuation?)camping was also feeling uncomfortable, and even dirty because it was difficult to get washed. I was young and it was not serious concerns. But now, I am seventy-three years old. I like comfort, a real roof when it rains or when the weather is too hot or too cold, a bathroom for the family, just the family. Anyway, a flat for living and the countryside near for walking whenever I want. Now, it is what I prefer.

Une HORREUR qui m'a fait frémir! B pour le reste
Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de nedjy, postée le 28-07-2025 à 06:07:15 (S | E)
1)Do you like camping? With what comfort?


Yes, I like camping with just my boyfriend, a tent and a sleeping bag.
I also like to have a nice picnic basket with wine,chocolate sandwiches and fresh fruit to enjoy under the stars.
I love bringing a camera to take photos. I leave my house around 5pm with my boyfriend.
Along the road for nearly an hour taking photos of the setting sun.
We put up the tent and have dinner together, looking up at the stars. After 30 minutes of cuddling under the stars,we return to the tent ,get into the sleeping bag and sleep until the morning.
That's how I like camping. TBon texte!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 28-07-2025 à 23:32:39 (S | E)
Hello,
Suis dans une zone quasi-blanche. Cet après midi, j’ai réussi à avoir un peu de réseau, RIEN ce soir… je ne peux ni copier- coller de mon ordinateur, ni mettre couleurs et typographie …
J’espère retrouver le moyen de vous joindre demain et les 2 jours suivants pour les corrections.
Fingers crossed!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de gerold, postée le 29-07-2025 à 16:19:23 (S | E)
ANSWER C:

My remarks:

1) Do you like camping ? With what confort ?

I haven’t went camping for a long time, decades and even more. I was a teenager. But I remember that I really liked it : being in xx countryside the whole time, sleeping under the stars, breathing the fresh air…and xx (I would add something in -ing) very cheap holidays. But I remember as well, after several days (punctuation?)camping was also feeling uncomfortable (je comprends que c'est le camping lui-même qui se sent mal à l'aise), and even dirty because it was difficult to get washed. I was young and it was not serious concerns. But now, I am seventy-three years old. I like comfort, a real roof when it rains or when the weather is too hot or too cold, a bathroom for the family, just the family. Anyway, a flat for living (xx) and the countryside near for walking whenever I want. Now, it is what I prefer.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 29-07-2025 à 22:44:33 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Voici le début de votre correction... cela peut prendre beaucoup de temps, et avec un réseau très instable, beaucoup d'énergie
aussi. Je commence ! J'avais écrit ceci hier... Ce matin, le réseau semblait un peu stabilisé. Je me suis donc mise ardemment au
travail sur vos indications/ corrections / suggestions ... pour me rendre compte ce soir.... que ce n'est pas cet exercice qui devait être corrigé
ce soir, mais la version !
Eh bien TANT PIS ! La réalisation fut difficile, et je ne vais pas, maintenant me mettre à faire les transferts pour la version... Donc, j'ai interverti les dates et exercices : ce soir : expression, demain : version ! Merci de m'excuser... [Ceci vous laissera un peu plus de temps pour
travailler la version et/ ou la question que je vous ai posée.]

ANSWER A : initial text and my indications:

Do you think that girls have as many opportunities in life as boys? Since the 15th (centurie and until the present day
women have fought for equal rights, and to gain their freedom and independence. In 2025, I believe we can say that attitudes and
customs have changed a great deal. Girls have access to the (high schools*, they are CEOs of major companies, they pilot
cranes on construction sites and fly bombers. Recently, women have even been present on the latest nuclear submarines.
In sport, we see women on rugby pitches and boxing rings. There are more and more women in politics. They can vote, choose whether or
not to have children, have their own bank (account.
However (here is still too much violence against women in the world, too many women XXX subjected to male
(dictatorship and oppressed. We have a long way to go, but the fight goes on... TB

*Attention : High school signifie Lycée en anglais. To become CEOs of major companies, girls (and boys) must study a lot more
than in high school. What the French call « Grandes Ecoles » are among the best places to study and become executives.

ANSWER A : Gerold’s indications : (21/07/25)

Do you think that girls have as many opportunities in life as boys? Since the 15th (centurie and until
the present day( women have fought gerold would use another form)for equal rights, and to gain their freedom
and independence.
In 2025, I believe we can say that attitudes and customs have changed a great deal. Girls have access to the (high schools*,
they are CEOs of major companies, they pilot cranes on construction sites and fly bombers. Recently, women have even been
present on the latest nuclear submarines. In sport, we see women on rugby pitches and boxing rings. There are more and more
women in politics.They can vote, choose whether or not to have children, have their own bank (account. etc...

Thanks to courageous, intelligent and inspirational women such as the very first French feminist Christine de Pisan, followed by
the English
women Mary Astell and Margaret Cavendish, and the woman nicknamed " the Mother of Feminism": Mary Wollstonecraft who have been the
pioneers. (*)However (here is still too much violence against women in the world, too many women (XXX subject(ed
to male (dictatorship and oppressed. We have a long way to go, but the fight goes on...
Dans cette phrase, le nom et la nationalité des pionnières étaient déterminés. (D’où les articles : ‘the’)


ANSWER A : Magie’s suggestions following Gerold’s and my indications.

Do you think that girls have as many opportunities in life as boys?
Since the 15th century and until the present day, women have (been fighting for equal rights, and to gain their freedom
and independence. In 2025, I believe we can say that attitudes and customs have changed a great deal. Girls have access to the
high schools, they work as CEOs of major companies, they pilot cranes on construction sites and fly bombers. Women are even
present on the latest nuclear submarines. We can see girls on rugby pitches and boxing rings. Women can vote, lead governments
and choose whether or not to have children, have their own bank account, etc...
(We can thank the courageous, intelligent and inspirational women such as the very first French feminist Christine de Pisan, followed
by the English women Mary Astell and Margaret Cavendish, and the woman nicknamed " the Mother of Feminism": Mary Wollstonecraft who
have been the pioneers. However (there is still too much violence against women in the world, too many women (are subject B to
male dictatorship and oppressed. We have a long way to go, but the fight goes on...

inspiring (adj)= encouraging/ qui suscite l'inspiration
inspirational(adj)= making you feel encouraged/source d'inspiration ( pour moi il n'y a guère de différences)


The sentence beginning with « Thanks to » is not a real sentence (a verb or verbs needed).YES
- inspirational women ? would « inspiring » be better?
Inspirational : making you feel full of hope or encouraged:
Inspiring : encouraging, or making you feel you want to do something: Like Magie, I cn’t see much difference, but I’d prefer : inspiring
- To be subject to
- However here is still too much violence… «here» is wrong, a typo. You’re right. It must be a typo
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ANSWER B: Topic 3: initial text:

'Of course!' men say, girls and boys now have the same rights, the same occasions. They go to the same schools, play together, study together and hear the medias harping on about "me too" and men who are allowed to take X two weeks leave for the birth of a baby! So, who would say that they are not equal?
It is well known that girls are less(good in maths and sciences because a part of their brains was less stimulated when they were very young.
It is therefore society determining and shaping the future of kids, not their intelligence, and this is a terrible realization (acknowledgment?)...Women must be persuaded that they are intellignet; men are constantly repeted that they are...
(a link is missing…) Women must stop working when they have kids, while men can go on working when they want. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop an attachement to the kids... So, it is not a question of rights but of circumstances...
(the ending isn ‘t clear… and not a good conclusion to a good work! Pity! )

ANSWER B: Topic : Gerold’s indications : (A good text but with some typos)

'Of course!' men say, girls and boys now have the same rights, the same occasions. They go to the same schools, play together, study together and hear the medias harping on about "me too" and men who are allowed to take xx two weeks leave for the birth of a baby! So, who would say that they are not equal?
It is well known that girls are less (good in maths and sciences because (xx part of their brains was less stimulated when they were very young.
It is therefore society determining and shaping the future of kids, not their intelligence, and this is a terrible realization...Women must be persuaded that they are intellignet; men are constantly repeted that they are...
Women must stop working when they have kids, while men can go on working when they want xx. Women have what is called maternal instinct,
but men have to learn to develop an attachement (not the right word, I think) to the kids... So, it is not a question of rights but of circumstances...
(I don't understand the end)

ANSWER B: Topic 3: A good text but with some typos: gerold said ; my indications after Gerold's.

'Of course!' men say, girls and boys now have the same rights, the same occasions. They go to the same schools, play together,
study together and hear the medias harping on about "me too" and men who are allowed to take xx two weeks leave for the birth of a baby! So, who would say that they are not equal?
It is well known that girls are less good in maths and sciences because xx part of their brains was less stimulated when they were very young.
It is therefore society determining and shaping the future of kids, not their intelligence, and this is a terrible realization (acknowledgment)... Women must be persuaded that they are intellignet; men are constantly repeted that they are...
Women must stop working when they have kids, while men can go on working when they want xx. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop an attachement (not the right word, I think) to the kids... So, it is not a question of rights but of circumstances... (whether some unecpected scenes happen, or not; (I don't understand the end) I think I understand... but the use of 'circumstances' makes it somewhat clumsy.

J'ai vu quelques typos, mais ce qui m'a le plus gênée, est le manque de liaisons logiques et la juxtaposition d'idées, très intéressantes, mais qui manquent d'ordre. Le tout laisse une impression de bonnes idées dites confusément...

ANSWER B: TOPIC3: Magie's suggestions

Mon essai d'amélioration selon vos remarques, en espérant ne pas avoir rajouté de fautes alors qu'il n'y en avait pas beaucoup. Avec mes remerciements pour votre aide

Of course! Men say: ‘Girls and boys now have the same rights and opportunities.’
First, schools are co-educational. Girls and boys play together and study together. Second, they hear the media constantly harping on about the slogan: ‘Me too.’
Furthermore, nowadays men are entitled to X two weeks ' leave when a child is born. So who would dare deny gender equality?
However, if we say that girls are less gifted in mathematics and science, it is actually because a part of their brain was less stimulated when they were very young. It is therefore society that determines and shapes children's futures, not their intelligence, and that is a terrible realisation...
On the other hand, women have to convince themselves that they are intelligent, while men are constantly told that they are...TB
On top of that, women have to stop working when they have children, while men can go on working when they want to. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop their paternal love.
To conclude, gender equality is therefore not a question of rights, but of education.

TB suggestions!

ANSWER B TOPIC3: Gerold's and Magie's suggestions

Of course! Men say: ‘Girls and boys now have the same rights and opportunities.’
First, schools are co-educational. Girls and boys play together and study together. Second, they hear the media constantly harping on about the slogan: ‘Me too.’
Furthermore, nowadays men are entitled to a two weeks' leave when a child is born. So who would dare deny gender equality?
However, if we say that girls are/not as/so good* at mathematics and science, it is actually because a part of their brain was less stimulated when they were very young. It is therefore society that determines and shapes the children's futures (no -s), not their intelligence, and that is a terrible realisation...
On the other hand, women have to convince themselves that they are intelligent, while men are constantly told** that they are...
On top of that, women have to stop working when they have children, while men can go on working when/if they want to. Women have what is called maternal instinct, but men have to learn to develop their paternal love/to take care more of their children.
To conclude, gender equality is therefore not (only) a question of rights, but (also) of education.


* Les Anglais préfèrent le comparatif d'inégalité au comparatif d'infériorité, surtout si l'adjectif est court. En tout cas, "less good" est jugé incorrect ou au moins maladroit.
** "..men are constantly repeated" me semble faux parce que la construction est to repeat something to somebody, pas somebody something, ce qui empêche de former un passif.


Magie et Gerold: d'excellents réemplois de mots de liaison. Très bon travail.
Bravo donc pour tout ce travail et ce temps consacré pour très bien le faire.
Tout 'Follow Up Work' sera le bienvenu si vous voulez encore corriger, ou ajouter quelque chose.

Encore et à nos

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 29-07-2025 à 22:55:53 (S | E)
Hi!

1) Je me suis trompée de date sur l'exercice à corriger (comme annoncé au début...)
Mais comme ce n'était pas suffisant ...

2) J'ai posté cette correction et l'ai colorisée et typographiée sur le fil de la version...
J'ai donc fait un copier collé vers ce fil.... et perdu les couleurs, soulignements, italiques, smileys... Je refais tout
ça depuis 40 minutes et je suis épuisée... mais au moins le réseau a tenu !

Je m'occuperai demain soir de la correction de la version (heureusement, vos corrections vous ont été envoyées à temps), le 31
de Our Story, et Playing with words... Pardonnez-moi ces contre temps ! ( pas de Playing on words ce mois-ci,
puisque j'ai été entraînée à continuer les corrections de juin et ai oublié de publier juillet ! Shame on me ! )
Les corrections de la partie d'expressions sur le camping seront corrigées ensuite, asap, mais pas avant le 31 car ma famille grogne !

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 30-07-2025 à 19:37:36 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Nobody to suggest anything better?

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de gerold, postée le 30-07-2025 à 21:24:10 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER C:

My remarks:

1) Do you like camping ? With what comfort ?

I haven’t gone camping for a long time, decades and even more. I was a teenager. But I remember that I really liked it : being in the countryside the whole time, sleeping under the stars, breathing the fresh air … and enjoying very cheap holidays. But I remember as well that, after several days of camping, I was also feeling uncomfortable, and even dirty because it was difficult to get washed. I was young and that was not a serious concern. But now, I am seventy-three years old. I like comfort, a real roof when it rains or when the weather is too hot or too cold, a bathroom for the family, just the family. Anyway, a flat to live in and the countryside near is this correct??, or should we use nearby? to walk in whenever I want. Now, it is what I prefer.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de magie8, postée le 31-07-2025 à 09:18:56 (S | E)
hello follow up apres les differentes corrections
answerA

Do you think that girls have as many opportunities in life as boys?
Since the 15th century and until the present day, women have been fighting for equal rights, and to gain their freedom and independence. In 2025, I believe we can say that attitudes and customs have changed a great deal. Girls have access to the Elite Schools, they work as CEOs of major companies, they pilot cranes on construction sites and fly bombers. Women are even present on the latest nuclear submarines. We can see girls on rugby pitches and boxing rings. Women can vote, lead governments and choose whether or not to have children, have their personal bank accounts, etc...
The pioneers and inspiring feminist women were the very first French feminist Christine de Pisan, followed
by the English women Mary Astell and Margaret Cavendish, and the woman nicknamed " the Mother of Feminism": Mary Wollstonecraft; we can thank them.
However there is still too much violence against women in the world, too many women are subject to
the dictatorial men's rules and always oppressed. We have a long way to go, but the fight goes on...

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 90/ Taking it easy 36 de here4u, postée le 31-07-2025 à 15:55:30 (S | E)
Hello you all,


follow up après les différentes corrections
answerA

Do you think that girls have as many opportunities in life as boys?
Since the 15th century and until the present day, women have been fighting for equal rights, and to gain their freedom and independence. In 2025, I believe we can say that attitudes and customs have changed a great deal. Girls have access to the Elite Schools, they work as CEOs of major companies, they pilot cranes on construction sites and fly bombers. Women are even present on the latest nuclear submarines. We can see girls on rugby pitches and boxing rings. Women can vote, lead governments and choose whether or not to have children, have their personal bank accounts, etc.
The pioneers and inspiring feminist women were the very first French feminist Christine de Pisan, followed by English women Mary Astell and Margaret Cavendish, and the woman nicknamed " the Mother of Feminism": Mary Wollstonecraft; we can thank them.
However there is still too much violence against women in the world, too many women are subject to the dictatorial men's rules and always still oppressed. We have a long way to go, but the fight goes on...

C'est parfait, Magie ! Merci de ce très bon travail.

to the dictatorial men's rules: to men's dictatorial rules.

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