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Christmas (correction)
Message de noiramulul02 posté le 31-12-2007 à 13:14:51 (S | E | F | I)
J'aimerais s'il vous plaît que quelqu'un me dise s'il y a des fautes dans mon texte(s) ci-dessous:
In my opinion, Christmas is not only for children. I think Christmas is a family gathering. It is a tradition to decorate christamas tree at home or in the garden with the other member ofthe family for example our grandparents. Some family celebrate the birth of Christ and it is a tradition to put a Nativity scene under the Christmas tree. In the evenning we can sing Christmas carols for celebrated the Father Christmas or Santa Claus in some country. It is a tradition to share a meal with the family after have prepare Yule cakes. That why, Christmas is not only for children. For example, at the television during Christmas the program is not only for children, it's a family program. In the morning Christmas, we give one another cards or presents so if we exchange presents and cards Christamas is not only for children.
J'espère avoir réponse et vous remercie d'avance!!!
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Modifié par bridg le 31-12-2007 13:21
Message de noiramulul02 posté le 31-12-2007 à 13:14:51 (S | E | F | I)
J'aimerais s'il vous plaît que quelqu'un me dise s'il y a des fautes dans mon texte
In my opinion, Christmas is not only for children. I think Christmas is a family gathering. It is a tradition to decorate christamas tree at home or in the garden with the other member ofthe family for example our grandparents. Some family celebrate the birth of Christ and it is a tradition to put a Nativity scene under the Christmas tree. In the evenning we can sing Christmas carols for celebrated the Father Christmas or Santa Claus in some country. It is a tradition to share a meal with the family after have prepare Yule cakes. That why, Christmas is not only for children. For example, at the television during Christmas the program is not only for children, it's a family program. In the morning Christmas, we give one another cards or presents so if we exchange presents and cards Christamas is not only for children.
J'espère avoir réponse et vous remercie d'avance!!!
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Modifié par bridg le 31-12-2007 13:21
Réponse: Christmas (correction) de inter_de_blida, postée le 31-12-2007 à 16:16:42 (S | E)
u're right
