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Story of a Shoe
Message de flo3299 posté le 16-02-2009 à 08:58:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'indiquer mes erreurs dans le texte ci-dessous, merci d'avance.
Shoe Of the Renaissance
Charles the eighth, who had six toes, ordained to make a special shoe just for him. Because of his six toes, the shoe had a large extremity.
At the time, the shoe became fashion, and it's worn all along Louis the thirteenth's reign.
This shoe, sometimes, could reached thirty-tree centimeters of with, and it was really difficult to walk with.
This shoe had a few nicknames for its strangeness like "Bear's foot" "cow's muffle" "duck's beak". We can supposed that the shoes was extremely expensive and probably decorated of a lot of diamonds. Besides the shoes was only worn by rich persons.
Merci d'avance
Message de flo3299 posté le 16-02-2009 à 08:58:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'indiquer mes erreurs dans le texte ci-dessous, merci d'avance.
Shoe Of the Renaissance
Charles the eighth, who had six toes, ordained to make a special shoe just for him. Because of his six toes, the shoe had a large extremity.
At the time, the shoe became fashion, and it's worn all along Louis the thirteenth's reign.
This shoe, sometimes, could reached thirty-tree centimeters of with, and it was really difficult to walk with.
This shoe had a few nicknames for its strangeness like "Bear's foot" "cow's muffle" "duck's beak". We can supposed that the shoes was extremely expensive and probably decorated of a lot of diamonds. Besides the shoes was only worn by rich persons.
Merci d'avance
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de linsey34, postée le 16-02-2009 à 09:22:34 (S | E)
Dear Flo,
en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
Charles the eighth, who had six toes, ordained to make a special shoe just for him. Because of his six toes, the shoe had a large extremity.
At the time, the shoe became fashion, and it's worn all along Louis the thirteenth's reign.
This shoe, sometimes, could reached thirty-tree centimeters of with, and it was really difficult to walk with.
This shoe had a few nicknames for its strangeness like "Bear's foot" "cow's muffle" "duck's beak". We can supposed that the shoes was extremely expensive and probably decorated of a lot of diamonds. Besides the shoes was only worn by rich persons.
fashion is a noun
it's = temps à changer
could is followed by the infinitive
tree or three ?
decorated of = préposition à changer
with ?? Maybe width...
can is also followed by the infinitive (like all modals)
shoe or shoes?
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de flo3299, postée le 16-02-2009 à 10:50:57 (S | E)
Charles the eighth, who had six toes, ordained to make a special shoe just for him. Because of his six toes, the shoe had a large extremity.
At the time, the shoe became in fashion, and it was worn all along Louis the thirteenth's reign.
This shoe, sometimes, could reach thirty-three centimeters of width, and it was really difficult to walk with.
This shoe had a few nicknames for its strangeness like "Bear's foot" "cow's muffle" "duck's beak". We can suppose that the shoes was extremely expensive and probably decorated about a lot of diamonds. Besides the shoe was only worn by rich persons.
Merci pour l'aide, est-ce que le texte, est mieux ?
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de flo3299, postée le 17-02-2009 à 11:06:49 (S | E)
petite aide s"il vous plaît...
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de linsey34, postée le 17-02-2009 à 12:54:27 (S | E)
Hello back !!
fashion = nom
quel est l'adjectif ?
Bye !
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de flo3299, postée le 17-02-2009 à 12:59:32 (S | E)
c'est fashionable ?
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de caz9, postée le 17-02-2009 à 13:22:55 (S | E)
Pour moi, je peux voir plus de fautes!
en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
Charles the eighth, who had six toes, ordained (quelle est le mot en français que vous voulez utiliser ici?) to make a special shoe just for him. Because of his six toes, the shoe had a large extremity. (qu’est-ce que vous voulez dire par “extremity”?)
At the time, the shoe became in fashion, and it was worn all along Louis the thirteenth's reign.
This shoe, sometimes, could reach thirty-three centimeters (ce mot est américain, pas anglais!) of width, (ce phrase n’est pas bon!) and it was really difficult to walk with.
This shoe had a few nicknames for its strangeness like "Bear's foot" "cow's muffle" (qu’est-ce que vous voulez dire par “muffle”?) "duck's beak". We can suppose that the shoes was extremely expensive and probably decorated about a lot of diamonds. Besides the shoe was only worn by rich persons.
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de flo3299, postée le 17-02-2009 à 13:38:12 (S | E)
ordained = a ordonée
extremity = extremité
muffle =mufle
This shoe had a few nicknames because of its strangeness like "Bear's foot" "cow's muffle" "duck's beak". We can suppose that the shoes were extremely expensive and probably decorated to a lot of diamonds. Besides the shoe was only worn by rich people.
Réponse: Story of a Shoe de caz9, postée le 17-02-2009 à 20:50:37 (S | E)
Très bien!
Il y a juste une faute – en rouge. Il faut que vous vérifiiez le traduction des autres mots ! (et bien sûr, les autres mots en rouge que vous n'avez pas changés !)extremity = extremité - utilisez un autre mot!
This shoe had a few nicknames because of its strangeness like "Bear's foot" "cow's muffle" "duck's beak". We can suppose that the shoes were extremely expensive and probably decorated to a lot of diamonds. Besides the shoe was only worn by rich people.
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Modifié par mariebru le 17-02-2009 21:04
