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Message de flo3299 posté le 08-06-2009 à 20:04:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider pour mes fautes , merci d'avance
Yesterday, It was Mother's day, because of that I offered a present to my mum. I'll explain what occured :
It was 8.00 in the morning, when I yelled :
"Happy Mother's day! I have a present for you! I hope you'll like it"
"Oh thank you to think about it" my mum retorted " But you don't have to yell to give it to me."
"Sorry, I just would like to say that I had to buy it in Lyon yesterday afternoon, There was a lot of people. It was horrible, They all came to buy one for their mum . Besides I'm so sorry for the wrapping. I'm definitely not good to wrap presents!" I explained
"No problem, I have my present, It's the more important!
"Here's your present"
"Thanks, you don't have to buy one for me, You just had to pick a flower into our garden, but I do like it! Thanks Again! She said thanking me
And continued :
"it's wonderful I'm just going to wear it! "
And then, as I know that She loves the chocolate, I give her a chocolate bar ( not Wonka's bar, I didn't find it ) :
She complained :
"You want me big ? " She laughed
"No, but I know you do enjoy it, don't you ? "
"Yeah, I do, I'm fond of it! Thanks for all these presents! I really apreciated Mother"s day! it's pity that All the day are not Mother's day! " She said kissing me.
Message de flo3299 posté le 08-06-2009 à 20:04:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider pour mes fautes , merci d'avance
Yesterday, It was Mother's day, because of that I offered a present to my mum. I'll explain what occured :
It was 8.00 in the morning, when I yelled :
"Happy Mother's day! I have a present for you! I hope you'll like it"
"Oh thank you to think about it" my mum retorted " But you don't have to yell to give it to me."
"Sorry, I just would like to say that I had to buy it in Lyon yesterday afternoon, There was a lot of people. It was horrible, They all came to buy one for their mum . Besides I'm so sorry for the wrapping. I'm definitely not good to wrap presents!" I explained
"No problem, I have my present, It's the more important!
"Here's your present"
"Thanks, you don't have to buy one for me, You just had to pick a flower into our garden, but I do like it! Thanks Again! She said thanking me
And continued :
"it's wonderful I'm just going to wear it! "
And then, as I know that She loves the chocolate, I give her a chocolate bar ( not Wonka's bar, I didn't find it ) :
She complained :
"You want me big ? " She laughed
"No, but I know you do enjoy it, don't you ? "
"Yeah, I do, I'm fond of it! Thanks for all these presents! I really apreciated Mother"s day! it's pity that All the day are not Mother's day! " She said kissing me.
Réponse: Mother's day de linsey34, postée le 09-06-2009 à 09:19:31 (S | E)
Dear Flo,
en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
Yesterday, It was Mother's day, because of that I offered a present to my mum. I'll explain what occured :
It was 8.00 in the morning, when I yelled :
"Happy Mother's day! I have a present for you! I hope you'll like it"
"Oh thank you to think about it" my mum retorted " But you don't have to yell to give it to me."
"Sorry, I just would like to say that I had to buy it in Lyon yesterday afternoon, There was a lot of people. It was horrible, They all came to buy one for their mum . Besides I'm so sorry for the wrapping. I'm definitely not good to wrap presents!" I explained
"No problem, I have my present, It's the more important!
"Here's your present"
"Thanks, you don't have to buy one for me, You just had to pick a flower into our garden, but I do like it! Thanks Again! She said thanking me
And continued :
"it's wonderful I'm just going to wear it! "
And then, as I know that She loves the chocolate, I give her a chocolate bar ( not Wonka's bar, I didn't find it ) :
She complained :
"You want me big ? " She laughed
"No, but I know you do enjoy it, don't you ? "
"Yeah, I do, I'm fond of it! Thanks for all these presents! I really apreciated Mother"s day! it's pity that All the day are not Mother's day! " She said kissing me.
Réponse: Mother's day de flo3299, postée le 09-06-2009 à 10:28:47 (S | E)
Yesterday, It was Mother's day, because of that I offered a present to my mum. I explain what occured :
It was 8.00 in the morning, when I yelled :
"Happy Mother's day! I have a present for you! I hope you'll like it"
"Oh thank you to think about it" my mum retorted " But you don't have to yell to give it to me."
"Sorry, I just want to say that I had to buy it in Lyon yesterday afternoon, There was a lot of people. It was horrible, They all came to buy one for their mum . Besides I'm so sorry for the wrapping. I'm definitely not good to wrap presents!" I explained
"No problem, I have my present, It's more important!
"Here's your present"
"Thanks, you didn't have to buy one for me, You just had to pick a flower into our garden, but I do like it! Thanks Again! She said thanking me
And concluded :
"it's wonderful I'm just going to wear it! "
And then, as I know that She loves chocolate, I gave her a chocolate bar ( not Wonka's bar, I didn't find it ) :
She complained :
"You want me bigger ? " She laughed
"No, but I know you do enjoy it, don't you ? "
"Yeah, I do, I'm fond of it! Thanks for all these presents! I really appreciated Mother"s day! I would like that All day were Mother's day to get presents! " She said kissing me.
Réponse: Mother's day de laure95, postée le 09-06-2009 à 11:14:26 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Yesterday, It was Mother's day, because of that I offered a present to my mum. I explain what occured :
It was 8.00 in the morning
"Happy Mother's day! I have a present for you! I hope you'll like it"
"Oh thank you to think (for thinking) about it" my mum retorted " But you don't have to yell to give it to me."
"Sorry, I just want to say that I had to buy it in Lyon yesterday afternoon, There was a lot of people. It was horrible, They all came to buy one for their mum . Besides I'm so sorry for the wrapping. I'm definitely not good to wrap (at + verbe en -ing) presents!" I explained
"No problem, I have my present, It's more important (fais du superlatif)!
"Here's your present"
"Thanks, you didn't have to buy one for me, You just had to pick a flower into our garden, but I do like it! Thanks Again! She said thanking me
And concluded :
"it's wonderful I'm
And then, as I know that She loves chocolate, I gave her a chocolate bar ( not Wonka's bar, I didn't find it ) :
She complained :
"You want me bigger ? " She laughed
"No, but I know you do enjoy it, don't you ? "
"Yeah, I do, I'm fond of it! Thanks for all these presents! I really appreciat
Réponse: Mother's day de flo3299, postée le 09-06-2009 à 12:32:04 (S | E)
Yesterday, It was Mother's day, so I offered a present to my mum. I explain what occured :
It was 8.00 in the morning, when I yelled :
"Happy Mother's day! I have a present for you! I hope you'll like it"
"Oh thank you for thanking about it" my mum retorted " But you don't have to yell to give it to me."
"Sorry, I just want to say that I had to buy it in Lyon yesterday afternoon, There were a lot of people. It was horrible, They all came to buy one for their mum . Besides I'm so sorry for the wrapping. I'm definitely not good at wrapping presents!" I explained
"No problem, I have my present, It's the most important!
"Here's your present"
"Thanks, you didn't have to buy one for me, You just had to pick a flower into our garden, but I do like it! Thanks Again! She said thanking me
And concluded :
"it's wonderful I'm just going to wear it! "
And then, as I know that She loves chocolate, I gave her a chocolate bar ( not Wonka's bar, I didn't find it ) :
She complained :
"You want that I put on wieght ? " She said laughing
"No, but I know you do enjoy it, don't you ? "
"Yeah, I do, I'm fond of it! Thanks for all these presents! I really appreciate Mother"s day! I want all days as today, and get presents ! " She said kissing me.
Réponse: Mother's day de linsey34, postée le 09-06-2009 à 17:36:10 (S | E)
I explain what occured :
quel temps serait idéal ici?
"Oh thank you for thanking about it"
je pense que tu t'es trompé de verbe
"You want that I put on wieght ? orthographe de "wieght"
Proposition infinitive = want somebody to do something
I want all days as today,
"would like" du départ était bien !
pourquoi all devant "days"?
Pour le temps, ne conjugue pas ton verbe!
