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Message de jade974 posté le 09-09-2009 à 13:42:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pourriez-vousme corriger ces phrases svp s'il vous plaît ?
the smell of gasoline and fish made Ian throw up.
The coming night promised miraculous fishing.
Ian was going back home to study anyway.
Tourists generally didn't like Mr. Corbiere.
Pete was surprised by his friend's decision.
He understood Ian's reasons nevertheless.
Ian hadn't been able the drugstore job.
According to Pete, there were many reasons Ian should have got a job at the sawmill.
Je vous remercie d'avance!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-09-2009 13:46
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Message de jade974 posté le 09-09-2009 à 13:42:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pourriez-vous
the smell of gasoline and fish made Ian throw up.
The coming night promised miraculous fishing.
Ian was going back home to study anyway.
Tourists generally didn't like Mr. Corbiere.
Pete was surprised by his friend's decision.
He understood Ian's reasons nevertheless.
Ian hadn't been able the drugstore job.
According to Pete, there were many reasons Ian should have got a job at the sawmill.
Je vous remercie d'avance!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-09-2009 13:46
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Réponse: Correction /smell of gasoline and fish de dolfin56, postée le 09-09-2009 à 14:05:20 (S | E)
Bonjour,
the smell of gasoline and fish made Ian throw up.I'd have used present participe for throw
The coming night promised miraculous fishing.
Ian was going back home to study anyway.
Tourists generally didn't like Mr. Corbiere.
Pete was surprised by his friend's decision.
He understood Ian's reasons nevertheless.
Ian hadn't been able there is no verb: able to ? the drugstore job.
According to Pete, there were many reasons
it's up to you.
Réponse: Correction /smell of gasoline and fish de exprofefl, postée le 10-09-2009 à 00:36:36 (S | E)
Bonjour,
La phrase "made Ian throw up" est bonne.
Réponse: Correction /smell of gasoline and fish de jade974, postée le 11-09-2009 à 18:55:42 (S | E)
Merci pour vos réponse!! A bientôt!
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